tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post4816793420774973790..comments2023-11-16T00:57:29.922-08:00Comments on Stephanie Ziel: Allegiant Alternate EndingStephanie Zhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03918907082777626437noreply@blogger.comBlogger119125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-92151213835750045912021-09-27T12:21:37.923-07:002021-09-27T12:21:37.923-07:00We are focused on giving our visitors an experienc...We are focused on giving our visitors an experience that will bring mental, physical, enthusiastic, and otherworldly equilibrium to their lives. We are, Shaantam Resorts one of the best <a href="https://www.shaantamresorts.com/" rel="nofollow">Hotel in Rishikesh</a>, we have a beautiful physical location at the lap of Lord Shiva (Neelkanth) close to the town of Rishikesh and encompassed by the powerful green Himalayan reaches. 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Lucashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09495708202051238543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-89756281775968170362021-03-17T07:09:55.806-07:002021-03-17T07:09:55.806-07:00If you’re late to the party, I’m showing up long a...If you’re late to the party, I’m showing up long after it’s over haha I’m so happy to have provided you with an ending that will allow you to reread it without hatred for years to come!!Stephanie Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03918907082777626437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-5440543319082867672021-03-17T07:09:07.753-07:002021-03-17T07:09:07.753-07:00I’m so happy you stumbled upon mine!! It was writt...I’m so happy you stumbled upon mine!! It was written with a fire I haven’t felt about writing in a long time haha I’m happy this could provide some closure for the series!Stephanie Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03918907082777626437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-41968665900380368722020-08-17T22:53:47.495-07:002020-08-17T22:53:47.495-07:00Hi, Im pretty late to the party but I just had to ...Hi, Im pretty late to the party but I just had to comment. I've just finished reading allegiant, I fell in love with the series and Tris & Four's relationshi0p, I asbolutely HATED theending. Veronica did them dirty. Tobias deserves a happy ending, and yours was PERFECT. it was emotional and scary in the way that he almostlost her, in a worse was than if she as dead... but right at the end... they were ultimately stronger than ANYTHING life could throw at them and that is so beautiful. I LOVE that you included original chapters from the book as it made it fit into the story perfectly, THANK YOU SO VERY VERY MUCH.I would not re-read the series in its original format, but now I will print your ending, add it to mybook and that is the only ending I now accept. thank you again, you're amazing! great writer and a great mind!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16830001100664982464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-81880954097914554832020-01-25T14:42:33.449-08:002020-01-25T14:42:33.449-08:00I just reread all the Divergent books. And I STILL...I just reread all the Divergent books. And I STILL could not get passed the fact that Tris dies at the end of Allegiant. I loved Tris' character, but even more than that, I just couldn't bear the idea that Tobias had to live without her. They had been through so much together and deserved to have a chance at living a peaceful life together. <br /><br />So now, many years after having read the books for the first time, I looked up alternative endings and found this. And now, I will pretend that this is the REAL ending so I can look back at this series with fond memories rather than painful ones.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10550624401098866296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-37443549431690709202020-01-23T06:17:10.589-08:002020-01-23T06:17:10.589-08:00I just finished Allegiant last night and cried. I&...I just finished Allegiant last night and cried. I'm glad I found an alternate ending.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13057655694356235436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-47647401411553536002018-01-03T17:06:57.813-08:002018-01-03T17:06:57.813-08:00Keep writing fan fiction you are a excellent write...Keep writing fan fiction you are a excellent writerMarieGal20https://www.blogger.com/profile/00650457401646235690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-46767780501938664652018-01-03T16:43:47.696-08:002018-01-03T16:43:47.696-08:00Thank you! I really appreciate it :)Thank you! I really appreciate it :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09607918661989100887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-80787426747659929812018-01-03T16:43:20.755-08:002018-01-03T16:43:20.755-08:00Thanks! I have a couple other books I've been ...Thanks! I have a couple other books I've been working on, but I work at a glacial pace hahaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09607918661989100887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-34663882237574647552018-01-03T16:42:24.263-08:002018-01-03T16:42:24.263-08:00Thanks so much for the kind words!Thanks so much for the kind words!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09607918661989100887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-19328790414734566952018-01-03T16:41:44.020-08:002018-01-03T16:41:44.020-08:00So happy I could fix it for you haha!So happy I could fix it for you haha!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09607918661989100887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-38915945882867576862018-01-03T16:41:08.305-08:002018-01-03T16:41:08.305-08:00Thanks!Thanks!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09607918661989100887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-86081918475649049292018-01-03T16:40:39.792-08:002018-01-03T16:40:39.792-08:00Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it!Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09607918661989100887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-31401166346667979122018-01-03T16:40:10.853-08:002018-01-03T16:40:10.853-08:00Thanks so much for the kind words! I, to this day,...Thanks so much for the kind words! I, to this day, haven't watched the movies or read Fours short stories.<br /><br />I will say I do have a few books in the making, but at the rate I work I will be dead before they get published >.<Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09607918661989100887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-5374669901262657842018-01-03T16:38:33.809-08:002018-01-03T16:38:33.809-08:002.5 years later...
https://stephanieziel.blogspot...2.5 years later...<br /><br />https://stephanieziel.blogspot.com/2013/11/epiloge-coming-soon.html?m=1<br /><br />Hahah Sorry!<br />Oh, and thanks for sharing eith your friends!! It is appreciated :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09607918661989100887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-39162293811552758272018-01-03T16:36:58.163-08:002018-01-03T16:36:58.163-08:00You're welcome! Glad you enjoyed it!You're welcome! Glad you enjoyed it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09607918661989100887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-61252056898377563072018-01-03T16:36:21.411-08:002018-01-03T16:36:21.411-08:00Sorry it's taken almost 3 years to get back to...Sorry it's taken almost 3 years to get back to you >.<<br /><br />I'm glad to have had such an impact! I hope things have gotten better :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09607918661989100887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-58692611266226931072018-01-03T16:33:55.820-08:002018-01-03T16:33:55.820-08:00Glad you enjoyed it!!Glad you enjoyed it!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09607918661989100887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-38082671132251298722018-01-03T16:32:57.599-08:002018-01-03T16:32:57.599-08:00Hello 2 years later! (I kind of forgot about this)...Hello 2 years later! (I kind of forgot about this)<br /><br />I'll be the first to admit that the Epilogue was nowhere near as good as the alternate ending. I addressed this with another commenter so I'll just copy and paste haha<br /><br />"Thanks for the feedback!! I will admit, my heart was not really in the epilogue as much as it was when I wrote the alternate ending. I think it was because I was ok with the epilogue, and also because I seriously put all my emotion and heart into the ending that I didn't really think an epilogue was necessary. But I got several requests to write a new epilogue to fit my ending, and like the ending that I wrote, I didn't want to stray too far from the book (since obviously VR is a talented writer).<br /><br />There are definitely timeline/consistency errors, I guess that's what happens when you write the epilogue 6months after finishing the series and not re-reading it before rewriting it :/ that's just laziness on my part.<br /><br />I'm glad to hear it's making it's rounds on social media. I seriously never dreamed it would get this much attention! I didn't even plan on sharing it with people, I wrote it for my own personal closure."<br /><br />Thanks again for the feedback, I really do appreciate it! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09607918661989100887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-10809135886244455502017-02-11T19:33:30.880-08:002017-02-11T19:33:30.880-08:00This is a amazingly emotionally astute alternate t...This is a amazingly emotionally astute alternate take on Verornica Roth's work really great job I would love to read more so please take think about adding more to this MarieGal20https://www.blogger.com/profile/00650457401646235690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-79689622492601874382016-12-17T05:39:14.504-08:002016-12-17T05:39:14.504-08:00This was the best alternate ending ever!!! Loved i...This was the best alternate ending ever!!! Loved it!! Hope you'll write more in the future!!miamac10https://www.blogger.com/profile/17294788276907031001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-83796550058784423282016-05-01T04:54:50.436-07:002016-05-01T04:54:50.436-07:00In the book Tris dies..so I don't know where t...In the book Tris dies..so I don't know where that came from?<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17030125464125752855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-35552603540247800932016-02-14T19:02:10.560-08:002016-02-14T19:02:10.560-08:00I REALLY LOVED your alternate ending!!! It was one...I REALLY LOVED your alternate ending!!! It was one of the best pieces of text I have ever read (and I read CONSTANTLY). Truly, truly thank you for that. But I feel this epilouge lacked the grandeur of your first one. The vice of each character was more defined, definitely. But I thought some of the facts just sounded a little off. For example, it taking her two years to be able to walk again, and in the original it states,“It targets explicit memories, like your name, where you grew up, your first teacher's name, and leaves implicit memories— like how to speak or tie your shoes or ride a bicycle—untouched.”<br />Excerpt From: Veronica Roth. “Allegiant.” iBooks.<br /><br />I get that it was for the purpose of Uriah's funeral being two years later, but still.... That aside, might I say, you are a great writer! excellent word choice! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8453230729987392696.post-52747238350604997012016-01-28T19:53:17.641-08:002016-01-28T19:53:17.641-08:00Stephanie, a true thanks for the alternate ending!...Stephanie, a true thanks for the alternate ending!! I was so distraught over the original ending and felt like it left a void that needed to be filled. Your ending does more justice to Tris and Tobias's characters and I finally feel better (as crazy as that sounds). Truly hope that the movie adopts more of an ending like yours. Thanks again. ��Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02911631590771445568noreply@blogger.com